Chameleon
hmm well you have a nice flow and a good stucture, nice vocabulary very good emotion a nice imageyr everything just really worked well with your part, really good half for ytou just keep doin ya thing alright 1

Bone
hmm well the thing about yours is that your lines are so long it just makes the read so long man, shorten your lines up more a lot more man, and the stucture is good but just shorten them lines imagery is hella good man big ups to that, nice flow good vocabulary nice shit man good job.

rtf in my new om confessions. if you got time

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