This was pretty good man...

Definetly not your best, but it was a solid drop. Emotion was good, but you couldve upped the vocab a little and made me feel it a bit more...Shit I dunno, its past my bedtime and I dont know what Im saying

Imagery was pretty dope, really no problem here...Just up your vocab a bit. I already consider you RV's best Poetry head and a top 3 Topical head, so there really isnt much left to prove on besides that vocab thing..

Pz

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