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Flyweight
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IP:
Voted For: Souljah
Peace to both emcees!!!
Souljah definitely got this one!
Punches were harder = "Lyrically you're a disgrace to the art of spittin,
Like a fight between Stevie Wonder and Ray Charles............
..........you'd win the lottery before any of your punches started hittin"
Structure needs improvement!
Captain D
Your structure was better and easier to read than Souljahs but your punches were not on fam! You need to work on your punches. Try different things to like metaphors, similies, and other techniques.
My vote this time is with Souljah!
Peace to both emcees!
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