Voted For: Premanition

Premanition

Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..”
Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer
3.. Kind of played..
Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled
Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’
4.. Seen the wayne's world shit before on him.. Decent flip..
kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes
cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds
0.. Just a weak ass statement.
damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality
you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty
6.. Decent concept..
this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress
& you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success
3.. Didn't really connect

Total - 16/100

Wayne

Your structure is fucking gay.

Now,

I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...//
0.. No punch..
My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...//
0.. Ejecting breakfast? Forced to shit..
attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...//
0.. Just a wack fucking statement..
I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...//
0.. Ok? Can you talk about something relative to a battle?
All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//
0.. Just another weak ass statement..
Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...//
0.. I DONT GIVE A FUCK ABOUT THIS SHIT. Make a witty fucking punch already..
Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...//
3.. Decent..
hit you in "spanish",send "rockets" in your "culo",make him switch his name from scam and take a trip to "pluto"...//
0.. Weak ass statement.. weak ass execution.. weak ass shit..

Total - 3/80

Vote - Premanition