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Old 07-21-05, 06:29 PM   #21
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Voted For: 9th Degree

6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window

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9th came okay with those two decent bars. The first was actually dope but the catch the drift concept ive seen before. Flow was fine, wordplay was coo. Just an average verse as Ive seen u come much much better. The last two bars were more of a blah gotta make sum lines type. Meta's usually end up that way. You just had the witty verse.

E Looch came weak. He didnt connect on his wordplay. His opener was a good concept but the wording was way off. Very stretched as well. Flow wasnt that great throughout. The closer was coo but really didnt deliver a hit. That was pretty much the scenerio throughout your whole verse. The older, wack style of RV got you the loss. Those lines might have been considered dope back then, but that style fell off a long time ago. So get back to battling, adapt, and elevate cause you didnt come close on this one.
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