listeing to lifes a song

flow/rhyme scheme-you suck..........haha no....this is dope flow is smooth and on point, your dad must have been black.... lol rhyme scheme can be a little bit more complex in some points....but flow is on point and smooth very polished....wait i heard one spot where you slipped a little

delivery/riding the beat- you do both of these very well what can else can i say... im feelin ya emotion...and you ride the beat very well very well.......

pronounciation/breathe control- good and good

lyrics/ style- lyrics are good you can always up ya lyrics.....style ya doin you so keep it up...and yea...overall ya style comes with time....so give it time to find ya own unique style

what to work on- quality, quality, maybe ...a more complex rhyme scheme, and complex lyrics maybe ....

overall just polsih ya shit up more and keep droppin tracsk

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