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Old 07-21-05, 07:40 PM   #9
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Voted For: Acuity

Acuity

Intro piece was good. Beat blew horribly.

Your qual needs some SERIOUS uppage.

Punches didn't hit that hard, and this shit was real light on personals. "better chance the holy grail laying next to a do-do" - what??? nah. Your flow is off beat too, you delivered the rhyme too early per bar on every bar so it makes your rhyme scheme sound sloppy.


Enyg: that london bridge intro was pretty much a waste since nothing was going on during it. I used this beat once a long time ago, still a good beat.

I hate the effect you use on these vocals. I didn't hear any actual aimed personals at dude really. Just generic punches really. And your flow was off at times. Dunno man, kinda disapointed in this verse personally since here was not one personal at all.

Vote: ac. ac's verse wasn't tremedously powerful either, but it had personals, and with hat it got my vote. 1
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