V. EC, the other dudes was longer, but it just didnt have the content i was hoping.. I think EC had a better plot / story like, although it was more of a take, not much of a story was developed too well in either of your verses, i mean, thats a stupid attempt to be abstract, and it doesnt work when you dont even tie that it all means together at the end, but my vote stands.

v. EC

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