Chalk Clorox . . . i think MC:Philosopher has this one . . . but i do like ur closer "ill wave bi (bye)
cause im rippin you apart both ways" but that was really the only good part of ur flow . . . structure needs work and MC:Philosppher i got the closer and all but i think u could have reworded better . . . NO HATE

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff