Voted For: ~K-Trini~

If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/
wack no punch stop glorifyin urself

Draw for the shank nd start insertin/
and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/
once again no punch

In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/
I'll stab you in the back while your workin/
no punch

Strangle you with some wire or string/
Body built upper-cut then i swing/
wack ur not hard so stop trying

Ill brake your heart just like a disket/
and i wont find trini just like a comet/
wack didnt even rhyme :/

Come heavely just like the blitz/
and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/
no punch really
all ur lines were corny and played so work on creativity metaphores and vocab oh yea and try to put a personal in ur battle
ok other kid no need to break it down ur flow was better but u had personasls
all i can say is work on ur vocab and try not to use as many fillers

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