this a hot as song kid lets see if you dont mess it up..no offense.....
ok its playin...styles rippin it like i expected..lol...iight i think you might be up now..
yeah..lyrics arent bad...only thing ya 3rd and 4th bar sounded rushed...and swallow some of ya spit homie i hear it lingerin in ya mouth..lol ..its coo though its a good verse..just seems alil short?...good lil mix either way i used to do this alot mix into industry cats songs and what not...peep my page
www.soundclick.com/bronxskid iight homie practice a bit more and try uppin ya quality to match the vocals on a lil remix like this and youll be iight na'mean 1ne..