kinda both short from the both of yall nah really showin alota stuff but its aight....Stanza..u did good had the ok vocab and structure was good really kinda simple in ur verse didnt show creativivty but u had a strucutre and an aight emotion in ur verse so made it an aight verse...E.C ur was short and really not that good u can do way better but u had the emotion and more strucuture and flow on it and showed more creativivty due to tha lines were more stretched out showin more vocab at the same time....v/ this is kinda tuff cuz both did an aight job yall can do better wit more lines but my v/ is gonna go to E.C cuz jus had a better structure and a better vocabulary though stanza had a better emotion on it e.c won cuz of the rest of it.....so good jb to the both of ya... and all did an aight job bu next time try to amke he lines longer it jus seems interestin that way....v/ E.C

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