my favorite:
Quote:
From the peak of Everest to the bottom of the Pacific
This love reigns forever and not at all specific
It’ll be given to everyone a thousand times over
That’s more luck than you have in findin a 4-leaf clover
This love actually occurred at first sight
And doesn’t discern from yellow, black, or white
It was around even during the beginning of time
And will be around when the sun loses its shine
This love can’t be found over a rainbow
But it can fill the emptiness with your soul
All you do is only follow and believe
And paradise is the gift you will receive
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^some nyce imagery.....goin on there....
you got a good concept here....i didnt see the last verse coming...though...judging by yur name i should have....i would have lyke to have seen a lil more depth with the imagery....love is something yu can get graphic with.....8/10....everything else was onpoint
keep writing mayne....yu got it in yu