Voted For: Pen N' Paper

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Pen
Good Peice I Think That You Couldve done a Little better With Your Storyline But It Was Ok .........Far as your imagery Go its Was good and Your Structure was Neat................My Overall feeling of your drop I think It Was Good But It wasnt all that Nuttin Specail but It Was good enough to take this battle

Murdz
Your stroyline was kinda confusiing to say from the start but Yo Imagery was great but its Like thats all that you relied on Your vocab was decent like usual Nuttin extraordinary but decent .............I Feel That You Really messed up with yo Story in this drop nuttin personal But I dont think That you take this battle ....Srry