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Emotion
Hmm Sok Okay Here Lyricle Nice Work I Like How You Worded Things Here It's Good That You Said It Well
Imagery
Hmm Lyricle Lacked A Bit But Sok Took This Category Cause He Expressed More In His Poem
Vocabulary
Lyricle Got It He Had Better Use Of Words Through Out HisPoem Also Good Rhyming
Structure
Both Need To Work On That Not Very Good At All Try Not To Center It Make's It Look Weak
Over All
Lyricle Won In Two Out Of Four Categories And Sok In One Which I Have To Give It To Lyricle
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