nice shit both of you vocabulary eh i think lyrcle got it jsut came with better words on this one and the imagery eh tie but if i had to pick it would be sokaris. the emotion had to go to lyricle though cause he expressed things and worded it very well with a better view on things. the structure eh both of you need to work on that really try not to make ie chaotic line the lines up to make it even bars and the sylable count went to lyricle on this one hands down lyricle got this here no doubt keep doing your thing man