Voted For: Export

Export
I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue
Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you
Eh, bad similie and bad punch.
The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit
Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded
Bad punch.
Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost
Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross
Bad punch again.
This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention
Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention
What the hell at the random multis.
Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb
Horrible closer, self glorification

Overall you need to work on originality and making your punches hit harder. They just have bad concepts, and your "wordplay" is old. Try re wording your concepts into nice punches.

flow verse
Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/
Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/
Last line threw flow off, unoriginal punch.
cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/
dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/
Statement and bad similie. No punch.
and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/
and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/
*yawn* Unoriginal AIDs punch and last one was blah.

You really need to work on more original concepts. No real punches, just statements. Similies were bad too. Work on making real punches, and real personals.

My vote goes to Export for an attempt at punches, even though they were weak, they did hit somewhat.

v- Export

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