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Old 07-23-05, 12:48 AM   #13
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
eatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
Statement and weak punch.
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
I blah blah blah.
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found.. Like Lost internet Connections
Ohh, I actually liked this closer. Cept for the set up.

Overall, I don't see why you say you are amazing. You make statements and go "I will, I do" blah blah blah. Work on making punches, not statements or self glorification lines.

DoContinue
time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
No. Bad personal and set up was weak.
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
I'm gonna line, wordplay was ok.
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
Ok closer, but nothing that great.

Overall, you didn't have that many punches. Only one I found was your closer. Your wordplay was blah, but that doesn't count as a punch.

Vote goes to Stanza for having a decent closer. The rest of the verses sucked. DC had some wordplay, but that's it. Work on better wordplay Stanza.

v- Stanza
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