Voted For: Stanza

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
wack opener nothing
IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
personal but i t was mad wack lol
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
mad played
ok ur lines were pretty played so work on creativity and ur personals werent that great at all to be honest
ur vocab was extremely basic up that overall u need mad elevation

Beatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
lol nice personal it was funny
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
lol funny 1st line kinda played
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
good never seen that b4 creative
ur vocba was good to
only thing i could say was try to throw in even more personals but u got this easy

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