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Old 07-23-05, 11:18 AM   #10
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King Solo
“see why I don’t battle ya, I mean I merked you in this conversation”
“its cool kid……I mean my shit’s so overwhelming its giving me constipation”

^nice bar... had me laughin hard.. I thought the conversation verse was creative but took away from the effect of any line being hard hitting.

Veyetal
and it pains me to say this, but even being retired, he's still getting beaten up
and you think he'd slow down on the whackness....but 'nos' is speeding up

had enough of this freak, always spittin shit, i just figured the guy was just dumb
until i saw king with his hand up his ass.......so its just his rule of thumb

^^LOL... well, problem with your verse is your lines weren't very effective either. I liked some of your concepts better, just the way you worded some of your lines is what messed it up.

Very close in my opinion, but veyetal barely got this.

vote = Veyetal...
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