Sweet Jesus...Its Long


Ya Strucure Was kew...Pretty Str8 Topic...Im Feeling It

Quoteables:

"Emotions abound
Those are the sounds
Of the hope filled abound.
I write because my heart
Is compelled by it.
I can’t stop.
My thoughts are repelled my it.
I see, feel, hear, taste
And smell by it.
Perceive the world with my pen,
Escape cells by it."
^sick imagery....

"Way the heart is heard or seen
Worst can be the loss of heart’s purity
We’re the soldiers in the night
Bearing boulders of light
On Shoulders of might
With the Onus to write
Verbal Onanism
Sinful if we spill forth our wisdom
Never to be read, never to be heard or forgiven
Speak, fair poet, youthful muses and scribes
You can ignite your youthfulness through truthful delight.
Shout down, vintage sage. Speak once through your eyes
Give us the might of wisdom from your decades of site.
This is the right and true path of the poet and seer
Who holds a power and a burden through the purpose so clear."


these two were deep for me..and i love reading stuff on another level...the onli thing i didnt like was the length...people sleep a lot on here....and a good thing will get passed up...other than that this was pretty good

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