Voted For: R-Rated

ok nice topic here....both did good here very hard to decide also so ill break it down a lil
RR- u had a good piece nice emotions,vocab,structure,flow, and basicly everythin except i didnt like ur creativity i think it coulda been better from u.....but still a good piece keep it up and jus work more on creativity jus a lil more aight....
GS-ok u had a good piece good vocab usage and a good structure and like RR u need to work more on that creativity but u also u need to work a lil more in ur emotion and jus a dash more in vocab but ur imagery was very good......
V/ RR urs was more better when i broke it down so....u get tha vote....but both did good jus RR had a better verse cuz GS u were missin ur emotion and vocab there but still good from both and keep them up......but my v/ goes to r-rated.....
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PLZ RTF wit a honest vote on my battles in my sig......or vote gets removed.......

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