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Old 07-23-05, 04:31 PM   #20
Typical
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IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK
WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS

vs

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes


hotshh! made some bad moves here, like the first three bars n the ending
closer was cool tho, good verse overall

9th degree came wit some punches i wasnt feelin, likethe 2nd bar 4th bar n evry thing after that...the bars that followed were really simple n u couldve closed WAY better...
good flow tho


vote hotshh! for punchs n consistency...
v/ hotshh!
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