Stanza- Alright Your punches was.......No where...Because they were weak, the wordplay was weak also. The only personal was him having "D/R'Z" Which is played out. Good structure though and good rhyming, i suggest to you Put some Multi'z in it.

Fux- Alright Nice verse. The 1st bar was a personal that he bitted, (But he did got unbanned) but either way nice bar. I liked the 3rd bar, had a personal and you flipped it with a punch...Decent Closer Fux.

V / Fux for harder Punches.

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