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Old 07-23-05, 08:14 PM   #53
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Voted For: .Murdz.

A'ight this was a decent battle...

Murdz...dope verse...good emotion, nice vocabulary...structure was good, flow was nice...and your gawd damn metaphors...

"Rocking a chain-which-isn't-mine, waiting for my brain-to-get-inline,
The devils got my soul, the lord put a stain-on-my-design"

Very nice...very good drop...we should topical battle sometime...

Pen 'N Paper...decent verse...your lines were stretched as fuck, so I wasn't feeling your structure or flow...and your talking to me about vocab..? There are a lot of basic words in your verse...it was decent, I really wasn't feeling the emotion either...

My vote goes to Murdz because he had the emotion...and basically everything else...

No hate.
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