Voted For: Pen N' Paper

standard topic. nuthin overly creative....

murdz.....you had a decent approach to the topic, i also liked the idea of switching from 3rd person to 1st person, that was quite original.....the delivery of the topic was good, you stayed on topic throughout....vocabs were impressive, there were some small parts where you outdid ya self but then some parts went a little basic.....nice emotion in your piece, you brought good imagery to the topic to with your words, gives the reader a picture as to what life in the ghetto is like.....first topical i seen from you, and it was good so overall.....6.5/10


pen n paper.....also a very good drop, as expected you stayed on topic all the way through and the delivery was excellent...the vocabs in your piece were very good, i feel you were more consistent with the vocabs in delivering complexity, i dont feel that you were as basic in places as murdz was....imagery in your piece was nice, as murdz did you brought a very clear picture to the topic and in addition inputted some real nice emotion which adds more depth to your piece.......overall 7/10

overall it was really close, both came real dope but when it came down to it i picked pen n paper cuz i felt that he stayed more consistent with the vocabs and didnt fall into a basic pattern as much.

V/ - Pen n Paper

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