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Old 07-24-05, 08:42 AM   #24
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket)

PLAYED CONCEPT ON THE SETUP BUT THAT DONT MATTA, PUNCH WAS CREATIVE AND HIT HARD..

Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)

ORIGINAL CONCEPT BUT WAS MEH IMO..

Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation

NICE NAME PLAY, GOOD CREATIVE PUNCH.

No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself

LMAO, FUNNY WORDPLAY. THIS WAS A DECENT PUNCH..

Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *

PUNCH A BIT TOO COMPLEX IMO, STILL HIT BUT NOT WITTY AS THE OTHETRS.

A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes

CREATIVE CLOSER, DECENT WORDPLAY, GOOD VERSE..

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Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...

GOOD WORDPLAY, DECENT PUNCH.

This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...

PLAYED CONCEPT IMO BUT STILL A DECENT HIT.

This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...

UMMM, DIDNT RHYME...NOT IN MY ACCENT ANYWAY..

Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...

PRETTY CREATIVE, DECENT PUNCH I SUPPOSE..

Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial...

CREATIVE NAMEPLAY, WAS FEELIN THE PUNCH, GOOD BAR..

Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself...

GOOD CLOSER, THIS WAS AIGHT..

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CLOSE AS FUCK HERE, AFTER READING BOTH VERSES TWIVE IMA HAVE TO GO WITH DIZZEE, HE HIT HARDER WITH MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES AND BETTER NAMEPLAYS.

BOTH CAM HARD AND YOU DIDNT DO ANYTHING WRONG WICKED APART FROM NOT ENOUGH PERSONALS.

DIZZEE GETS MY VOTE FOR COMING HARDER.

NO HATE,

RTF IN SIG.
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