ok both of u did good likethe imagery and conccepts from the both of yall both did good.....i see propain piece and has alot of vocab and a good structure and a good emotional feeling to it......rev. ur piece was good nice creativity there and there was also some parts that fell opf structure though need to work on that so it can work smoothly and good......and also need more emotion to it as well didnt feel ur verse wit alot of it.....so my v/ goes to Propain for havin a better verse cuz of the emotion and strucutre to it.....good job and keep it up my v/ is propain.......

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