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ROUND TWO

FOOL YOU DIG? IM CUTTING BACK CAUSE THE ARTILLERY'S TOO BIG
INSTEAD I'LL GRAB A ROCK AND JUST STONE YOU LIKE YOUR NEW SIG
-Nice Personal and a punch here..

I'LL LEAVE THIS KID SHAGGED........ CAUSE THIS LIL SAMBOS A BIG FAG
SAY HE'S ILL, BUT NO ONE BELIEVE IN HIS DEPTH (DEATH) LIKE ZIG ZAG
-Ahhhh Good Punch.

HE'S NOT A COMPLETE FAKE, SOME OF HIS VERSE'S A FRACTION HARD
BUT 9TH DEGREE'S BOUT AS REAL AS THE MOVES ON HIS ACTION CARD
-Liking the personal w/ Punch

YOU'RE LIKE A MUTE RECORDING ARTIST... YOU'RE A 'STRANGER TO CD'
CUZ NO ONES THROWN BIONIC ELBOWS SINCE POWER RANGERS ON TV
-Ha Good Punch

IN DIS MATCH I GOT NO GUEST APPEARANCE TO TAKE ME HIGHER BUT
ILL BURN DIS M**FUCKER DOWN WONT BE NO NEED FOR MC FIRETRUCK
-Ok personal and a punch

***NAH HOTSHH F*CK THAT, DONT TAKE NO CHANCES...FINISH HIM***

HOE YOU LIKE THE BLIND IN CASINOES......... YOU SEE-NO CASH
..................COVERS HIS FACE IN HIS PICS SO HIS PC DONT CRASH
-Good Pesonal and a punch

WAITED TIL I DROPPED MY VERSE SO YOU CAN TWEEK YA LYRICS
SO ILL GHOST YOU SO FAST YOU'LL BE ABLE TO SPEAK TO SPIRITS
-Nice wordplay.

DA ONLY REASON YOU A VET IS CAUSE PEOPLE LIKE ME "HURT CATS"
U COULDNT "COME FRESH" WIT PEPPERMINT STRIPS AND CERTPACKS
-Meh Explain dont get that

THATS WHY YOUR ASS STAY WACK LIKE THEM CATS IS RECRUITING
CAUSE IT AINT HARD TO "SEE 9 D'S" LIKE BARELY PASSING STUDENTS
-Ok Punch

U'LL PROLLY WIN DROPPIN DIRT BUT NO MATTER WAT DA SCORE SAYS
IM FLIPPING SO MUCH SHIT ON 9TH HE'LL GROW GRASS FROM HIS FOREHEAD
-Ok closer

Overall- nice verse Hotshh had some good punches w/ some personal. Liking your wordplay the 2nd part of the verse Kinda fall, but it was good ok punches nice personals. Keep Dropping

Kept urgin' me to drop my verse, you prolly pre-write bro
'Cuz the only heavywait you had was in the lobby before lypo
-Ok Punch

But in your sig, that belt must reflect upon your rhymes
You're on the grind...only beatin' people in a league with 2 lines
-Ok Punch, Liking the personal

Your use to 9? Practice, your fragile structure is gettin' broke
'Cuz you were the perfect match...'till I used you to light my smokes
-Ha Good wordplay, good punch

This hype's a joke, like funny crackheads, why's hatred ya game?
Really you ain't shit, that's not even a play off ya name
-Good Personal and a punch

I'll stay off the lame, lines...it's not that I'm used to war
But every wack concept I thought was one that you've used before
-Meh Ok punch weak but not strong

Hot's just mad I left TE, what's really damagin' this chump
Is right after I left, his crew voted me for battle of this month
-Ok punch and a personal

And I've been comin' wack lately, but there's something I wanna pop in
His skill's real hot...but we already knew every label would drop him
-Ok Punch still weak though

Haha, your verses suck, they depress me, I guess you write how you feel
And had a shadow of doubt...until d/r's followed right on your heels
-Lol Nice closer

Overall 9th that was a good verse, had some personals but the punches were weak in my opinion, I see you was trying to flip the personal into punches but uh it was still weak, some punchs I found good. Wordplays was good. Keep Dropping.

Conclusion- Alright I'mma have to vote for Hotshh, because I felt his punches were more harder. 9th nice verse but in my opinion I felt you came weak, If you added more wordplays into them PunchLines you would've gotten my vote, but they were weak, but still a good verse.