Business Not Personal
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Voted For: Drakel
Drakel... haha ya shit was funny man.... good personals, good hard punches. ya opener was just ok... lacked in a hard punch... good concept but just lacking a little bit. now your closer on the other hand was straight hotness.... excellent closer, funny as hell, hard punch... very good verse here
ya best bar:
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
Chalk Clorox... first of all your structure could use some help, if your structure is bad it ruins the flow to your verse. second of all, there was really no personals in your verse, it could of been used for anyone. the only personal in there was the 5000 posts. ya opener wasnt very good, you even dissed yourself in it.....?????? your closer was pretty good... the setup line could of been better. some of your lines were stretch compared to the other line in that bar
ya best bar:
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
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