Voted For: Formation

font:
you had some cool shit here man but the topic you wrote on wasn't creative enough lacked using the topic really you just talked about a girl basically not good enough here. the emotion eh not cool man but if the topic was something else it would of bin good and shit but naw man you should of came on something different

formation:
nice going stuck to the topic through the whole verse that was good i liked the emotion in here vocabulary very good structure was good not as good as your normal but it was. good i liked your wording in here you did it very well man thas why i think you got this battle....

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