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Originally Posted by Chalk Clorox
i quit reading after the 2nd paragragh,you vocab was alright ,im not sure what was wrong with it you just gatta make it more interesting............
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LMAO^ kids just a brainless fuck who cant be be bothered reading talent. maybe we should post some 50 cent lyrics,then hell read more.
this is dope bro.
alot of emotion used...alot of solid concepts. I acctually never relised how much you have elevated. you going topical like crazy bro.
My uncle built a bunk bed, so my dreams sunk Dead
really like this bro.
you got mice mutlis in this,solid flow. I enjoyed this bro.You should'a waited till next month and i woudl of voted it open mic of the month.
Ysd@