v/ - DAUBS


hopesfall had a short piece and the structure aint got shit to do with any topical verse, the approach was ok by you but seemingly basic, the vocabs weren't all that and the delivery of the topic cud be better, its like you dropped a no-show verse, there was some imagery and emotion in your piece but not enough to get the win.

daubs had overall the better verse, yeah he is still flowing with that text style structure and delivery but his verse had more complexity to it and i enjoyed it more, i felt that there was more feeling and thought put into his verse and he delivered the topic consistently with a nice verse.

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