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Old 07-25-05, 01:33 PM   #26
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Voted For: Young Dollar

neither one of you needed to explain y'all bars... (X)eed you fell off towards the end of your verse.. your best bars were:

Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type

^^they were str8, bars..

Young Dollar..
don't explain each bar, your concepts were easy to get.. xcept for the first one, cuz i didn't know he was battling 4fil.. try to slim the expl. list next time. your best bars were:

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil

N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight

Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard

^nice bars, but they started to get stretched the further you got into your verse. i thought your lines were more hard hitting and had better personals within.

good luck to both

v/ Young Dollar
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