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lmao...im slow...it honestly didnt register that yu were Spoken.....lol...Whats good fam?
Topic:..Killin them on it, fam....This was some creative stuff...HOF...definately...especially on here....ya know....
amongst the fallen leaves fell my dreams from the tallest tree
of success tried my best to achieve, but the stares had me
bare like arms absent of sleeves..with countless slurrs heaved at me,
i stand mispercieved bystanders spittin insults result in me
believing demeaning things..which made a ripple effect that
excited the men of my generations like nipples erect..
iLL imagery...ya wording is so slick...love that...
The emotion was iLL throughout...I kinda left my seat for a moment....
then piercing black sadness..suddenly a sullen
errie detered me...a boy a black boy with black eyes blood teary
again i love yur wording...out the norm...give yu that poetic feel....
Solid drop throughout....Pretty greesy...for ya surroundings....good job
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