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R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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Voted For: Paroxysm
Damn........thats a lot of lines so i'm just gonna go for the basics...
u had a very good opening with a sick closure.............
the best punch:
Cause im hoping we elope to change her name and her address
So im face to face with stress, but the way she fits that dress
weakest line:
We stayed awake for hours talking how our future may be paved
Then she fell asleep in my arms, we woke up the next day at 8........
very nice drop there::::::::
Vote:Paroxysm
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