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Old 07-25-05, 05:53 PM   #11
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
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Voted For: Keyweezy

Aii

Key

You're ill? Kid, I'll feed you with toxins just to see you vomit.
Be honest, watching "Sesame" proves to be your only street knowledge.
lol damn that was Funny Lol Good bar
Dopeness I'm portraying, intent to drop decent Con's betraying.
So I'll swipe his legs clean off, so no further steps can be taken!
Yeah That was Better Than The first one nice Wordplay
I'll end it now, methods of whoring? I jab at their chins quick.
& combining punches w/ rusty nails, just so you can get the hang of it
...Nice....
Overall man You had a dope verse some lines couldve been better but considering that you are sort of new to the site thats really good stuff man You got some talent 4real

You get my vote in this battle
BUt if you dont RTF b4 the day is out i will get this vote removed

Con
100% rec, bitch you got wack punches and low flow
Oh I remember, you won that topical by a no show
.....Aii Personal...
Go find some personals, I did my homework on you!
Your opponent didnt drop...
...Thats the only reason you didnt lose
....Why are you Resayin What You already said? Thats wack man
You use vets concepts, thinkin your problems are solved
They were used years ago...
...They're played now coz we all evolved
....Weak./....
overall man i Know that your verse couldve been alot more better and you used the same concept back to back talkin bout the same thang Thats Not good man that shows that you dont know how to use your personals and thats wack yo so I coudnt give you my vote in this battle man so srry
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