Voted For: Stanza

Stanza:

Good verse, original concepts, pretty creative...Punches all connected and hit, which is always a good thing
Structure was good, so flow was on point throughout the entire verse...Wordplay was pretty good, but you need to up your vocab. Overall, a strong verse

DoContinue:

Ok verse from you as well. You weren't that creative though, seeing as your smackdown line and womens tv line were both played as a fuckin sport...Didnt really see any real personals in either verse, so that is something that you both need to work on.

Overall, just elevate in being more creative

V/ Stanza

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