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Old 07-25-05, 06:17 PM   #15
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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

BOS:

Good verse, all original concepts, nothing played, strong punches...I was feeling everything about your verse except for the closer...It seemed like you had to rush, because I didnt really even see a real punch in it, just rhyming gunplay.
Personals were really good the first 4 lines had me laughing my ass off. YOu owned him man.

C Hood:

You started off terrible man. Those jail lines agains bars are played as amerikaz nightmare lines against marvjay. Punches were mediocre at best, Nothing really stood out to me man. Structure also could use some work, because it was fuckin with the flow

V/ BOS