Voted For: Drakel

chalk:
ill admitt it i cant battle worth shit,
5000 posts and you still havnt elevated bitch,
what do posts gotta do with elevatin? not a good punch/opening
but fuck it, your about to get raped,
cause i dont see your punches stickin like invisable tape,
if his punches are invisible tape, then they DO stick
ill kill this dude,
random line, don't add this if u're over the 10 line limit
leave your body worse than what your life is like,,
your winning chances like,
a dude in karate actually winning a fight,
like rhymes with like, but not very original, and karate people can win fights
put your verse in the mirror so you can reflect your loss,
your verse was writtin yesterday im bustin off top,
first decent punch, at least it makes sense
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
another good punch, good closing

overall- most of your punches didn't make sense, you got more than 10 lines, extra lines hurt ya flow


drakel:
match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
good punch/wordplay/personal
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
doesn't hit too hard, but ok
even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me
cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z
nothin special, ok tho
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
oooooo diss, chalk wears bras
whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus
so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish
good closing, but chalk's was better

overall- better punches, good flow, makes sense, wordplay's ok, much better verse

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