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Old 07-26-05, 09:18 AM   #13
Keyweezy
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Originally Posted by Sixth Sense
Voted For: Stanza

Yo
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
ok nice line 4/10 but not as good for a opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
.....lol....nice one man 8/10
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
ohhh nice closer 6/10

vs.

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
.....not that good
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
...hold up not a good personal there who said RV dont want him?
4/10
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
ok nice closer 8/10

Both did an aight vese but stanza's was way better at the punches cuz he had delivery to them and had a better flow to it key weezy u need to work on that iahgt man really....cuz u had the concepts but werent hittin hard cuz of the delivery but good battle.....jus keep it up yall but my v/ goes to Stanza....for better punches
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PLZ RTF WITH A HONEST VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES


Ok, that was NOT a personal. Otherwise, I'd explain. & wtf at delivery? That doesn't really have to do w/ anything. God, some kids are so stupid.
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Vs. Stanza 0-2 vote & I'll rtf.