arright listenin... hehe i got a good chuckle out of this...Did you record while listening to the beat? sounds like it was recorded to another beat and then just mixed over it- you need to spend more time writing the words to the track your recording, and rehearsing the flow- mic prescence will improve with time, you just need lots of practice. don't get discouraged, you should use enygma's tutorial on quality, because even though you have a cheap mic, there are some technic's that will mask that. good luck.

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