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Old 07-26-05, 12:00 PM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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cuz around my blcok niggas im the boss fools
tryna come up undetected heads will be plastered and glued
sound of guns blaring all these bitches screaming
makin my move to the back til i see red ray's beaming
^^nice bars

set up was nice, it would nice to see a few multis or a couple of metas, vocab can be upped some, but this was decent. Keep dropping.
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