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Old 07-26-05, 04:15 PM   #23
Spoken Word
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Voted For: Premanition

Wayne:

I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...//
^^no 1/10
My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...//
ok..check this...
^^decent 4/10
attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...//
^^no 2/10
I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...//
^^decent 4/10
All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//(eww)
^^funny 5/10
Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...//
^^good meta 6/10
Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...//
^^dope 7/10
hit you in "spanish",send "rockets" in your "culo",make him switch his name from scam and take a trip to "pluto"...//
^^ehh 2/10

Overall: 31/80 (39%)


Premanition:

“..Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..”
Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer
^^ehh 3/10
Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled
Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’
^^decent 5/10
kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes
cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds
^^ehh 3/10
damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality
you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*)
^^dope bar 8/10
this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress
& you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success
^^lol good closer 6/10

Overall: 25/50 (50%)


Vote: Premanition


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