"Every place brings back memories,
Of a kiss or a smile that you gave me
More and more I miss you
Sometime it’s hard to let go"

This was a very interesting piece to read and this ^^ part i could really relate to the feeling

"How many times did I pray you’d find me?
How many wishes on a star, glazing off into the dark, late at night
Dreaming I’d see your face, safe at home, unafraid, where you belong
So many times, visions of you would keep me strong
You were with me all along"

You use good imagery and really set the scene on this part and made me feel what you were writing was heartfelt

"The promises we break are never what we planned
Cause we planned to stay together till forever
But forever came to an end and it’s gone
Baby hear me when I tell you, I’ll forever love you
Hear me when I tell you
I need you, still and forever"

And this was a beautiful way for the piece to end i personally enjoyed your work it was honest heart felt and best of all this was something i could relate to and im sure a lot o ther people will feel the same!

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