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Old 07-26-05, 06:43 PM   #26
Macreep
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame
Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name
^^meh...decent....a lil weak for an opener..but ight..
So you better be carefull son, watch your back
N' fuck your member title, cuz...
In general... your just wack
^^Nice personal.......but a better set up woulda been better
And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second
He'll be gun-running
...without transporting weapons
^^This was your worse line in this battle man

You really lacked that one "OOH" punch here.You had a lot of decent punches(aside from the last one).I ain't feelin ya basic/50 cent type rhyme scheme neither.Had some good personals.Next time...try to change those fillers into set-ups for the punch...it would really help the punch.

In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table
How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable
^^Flow nicely....good metaphors too
Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada*
Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager
^^^Nice personal in set-up....and nice meta again
I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It**
The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked
^^^Nice meta and personal

I'm really diggin your rhyme scheme here man.(Don't worry...I ain't gonna bite it)Every line had a metaphor of some such.And 2/3 of your bars had a personal.You got skill homie.Keep it up.

Vote-Narc-Uzi