Voted For: Stanza

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
^^weak punch....but it was worded ight..so ya get points for that
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
^^^blah......weak
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
^^OK....I guess

Ur punches weren't exactly all that hot.You worded ya lines Ok.....that may have been the plus side to ya verse.Ya flow was choppy at points...speccially in that last line.Just make ya punches hit harder.

When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
^^Played as fuck...I heard this a couple times before
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
^^^people could hold they breath longer than a minute
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
^^^OK.................not all that bad

You had a played bar at first....but it got better afterwards.To me.....this verse was nothing special.Rhyme scheme sucked.But I think your punches had a slight edge to Key.

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