Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.



Kid you're fucking with God, this dude rougher than Barz??
How? When he wouldn't "C Hood" On the "Front Of A Car"
-Nice Concept good personal w/ a punch.

I'll get to sparkin at your brain, this dude's talkin is insane!
I mean, last time "He Threw His Hood Up".......................
..........................................He was "Walking in the rain!!"
-Again nice concept decent Punch

Faggot, I'll get the gat pressing to the roof of your mouth
Start shooting it out, and leave ya brain on the roof of your house
- Ok closer, Ok Punch.

Overall- You had some good punches with some decent Concepts. Worded your lines good so that's a plus :thumbsup: The closer is the Least Line I liked but it was a punch.





no street credibility...wit the cops you'll probably squeal/
so you bein in jail....is the only way your 'barz' are 'steel'/
-Ahhhh Played.

you ain't neva held a glock, holdin a 'safe' is the only way you gotta street on 'Lock'/
i'll have you in shock...you bein a dead racoon is the only way you 'On the Block'/...look at his sig
-I like this good concept and a good punch. Nice

every time you battle me i'll 'divide' your wins so ya record gettin 'split'/
B.O.S. are the initials but imma put a P cuz your verse is a P.iece O.f S.hit/
-Hmmmmm I say this a ok Punch.

Overall- The 2nd bar was my favorite in your verse. The 1st bar and the closer wasn't Ok, elevate on structuring your lines.

Conclusion- I have to vote barz he had good punches nice pesonals and worded it decent, Lines had some good Concepts. C-Hood, you had 1 personal with a great Punch and that's the 2nd bar. But your closer and your 1st bar was Ok but Barz got you with better punches throughout his whole verse

V/ Barz

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