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Old 07-26-05, 10:35 PM   #11
Triple_N
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yall def picked a ill beat..its a nice loop.........Jae....his flow is real simplistic....terrible rhyme scheme....lyrics is simple an to the point but seeme dlike he ran out of lyrics at end....DV....yea you alot calmer than u usually are...but u still seem outta place....ya rushing ya flow noticeably....lyrics was koo.......eng.....whoa eygn not flowing super speedy? I never thought I'd hear the day.....yea u fit the best out of all but lyrics...were disappointing....overall...the theme was proving ya faithfulness but yall was no where near creative enuff wit the topic to really make this a standout track...but it was still good you all added ya own unique flava too it...so stay up yall.......1
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