Beat-I like it Slow and Cool, it's relaxed.
Chorus-Hmmmmmm Vague I'm liking it
Verse-Next time to put some more emotion. I'm liking the Lyrics. I'm Liking the Metaphors, or wordplays I think
Chorus-Same
2nd Verse- Alright I'm liking your flow on this part. Lyrics is better on this part. Multi'z are display on this part
Chorus-Same
Verse- Decent Flow here. Lyrics good here.
Chorus-Same


8/10 Put some more emotion to it. I'm liking your flow lyrics could've been better. But Good Track.

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